Interactive Production - Peer Critique

Staff - Add more detail, like intricate elven details. Another suggestion was to add 2 forms, such as a light form and a dark form. The form of the staff when it's disguised and the form for when it's showing it's dark, cursed nature. I thought about these but forgot to add them earlier.

Some more feedback was to add colour concepts to my environments. Break up repetition in my third environment concept with the multiple baby rattles on the floor by changing the objects to different items such as building blocks or other toys.

Another point of feedback for the baby crib steampunk item was to change the things above the crib to objects such as planes, bombs or rockets.